Theme: It is hard to be yourself when you have others judging you, so you become what they think of you.
I know this theme is vague, like becoming yourself. The last part i will need to clear up as well. I want to improve upon this, but I think my conept is still good.
"But before Ah seen de picture Ah seen de picture Ah thought Ah wuz just like de rest." p.9
"Me, married? Naw, Nanny, no ma'am!.." p.12
"A pretty doll-baby lak you is made to sit on de front porch and rock and fan yo'self and ear p'taters dat other folks plant just special for you." p29
"Thank yuh fuh yo' compliments, but mah wife don't know nothin' 'bout no speech-makin. She's uh woman and her place is in de home. p43
"When you pull down yo' britches, you look lak de change uh life. p79
I like your theme but be careful of not using a cliche. I think you could be a little more specific on what it is that jealousy provokes you to become.
ReplyDeleteHope this helps :)